taj mahal Essays (315 words) - Grammar, Rhetoric, Essay, Copula

For this Peer Review Discussion Board, all students will need to do the following things: 1. Each student will need to create a new thread and attach a copy of his/her essay for review by classmates. Remember that since others are reading the essay, it is important that you always make sure you choose to write about things that you do not mind if others read. You will only receive credit for complete drafts that are a minimum of five full paragraphs. 2. Cut and paste the following questions into your response and thoughtfully and clearly answer the questions concerning the paper you are reviewing , be as helpful as possible to the author of this draft. Use complete sentences and specific examples. What is the essay's dominant impression or thesis? What points does the writer emphasize in the introduction? Should any other points be included? If so, which ones? Would you characterize the essay as primarily an objective or subjective description? What leads you to this conclusion? Point out some examples fo figures of speech. Could the writer use figures of speech in other places? If so, what and where? What specific details does the writer use to help readers visualize what is being described? Where could the writer have used more details? Would a visual have helped readers understand what is being described? Are all the details necessary? Can you identify any that seem excessive or redundant? Where could the writer have provided more details to support the thesis or convey the dominant impression? How are the details arranged? What other arrangement could the writer have used? List some transitional words and phrases the writer uses to help readers follow the discussion. Which sentences need transitional words or phrases to link them together with other sentences? Do any sentences contain misplaced or dangling modifiers? If so, which ones? How effective is the essay's conclus